Thursday, 14 May 2020

FUNERAL BLUES by W H Auden







Listen to the poem being read by John Hannah in the film Four Weddings and a Funeral.




Here is a song on the poem called Stop all the Clocks.

Stop all the clocks, cut off the telephone, a
Prevent the dog from barking with a juicy bone, a
Silence the pianos and with muffled drum b
Bring out the coffin, let the mourners come. b
Let aeroplanes circle moaning overhead
Scribbling on the sky the message ‘He is Dead’.
Put crepe bows round the white necks of the public doves,
Let the traffic policemen wear black cotton gloves.
He was my North, my South, my East and West,
My working week and my Sunday rest,
My noon, my midnight, my talk, my song;
I thought that love would last forever: I was wrong.
The stars are not wanted now; put out every one,
Pack up the moon and dismantle the sun,
Pour away the ocean and sweep up the wood;
For nothing now can ever come to any good.

ABOUT THE POET

W H Auden was born in 1907 in New York and died in Vienna in 1973.

TITLE
Blues – could refer to a depressed mood
It also suggests the kind of mourning or sorrow often found in popular music associated with African Americans (a slow, sad musical piece).

STRUCTURE
Even from the title, one can deduce that the poem is an elegy.

An elegy serves to mourn the loss of a loved one; but, can sometimes be about different types of feelings of sadness or a general sense of loss.

There are four stanzas, each consisting of four lines.
Many lines are written in iambic pentameter, a standard of elegies.
Every stanza follows an aabb rhyme scheme. 

THEME
The obvious theme of the poem is death and the grief that goes with it.
Throughout the poem, Auden makes a compelling statement about the devastating effects that the death of a loved one has on those left behind.
The theme of dependency is also a feature in the poem.

TONE
The tone of the poem is one of grief.

The poem is serious and depressing as it is about the mourning of a loved one. Some of the words that set this tone are mourners, moaning, dead, doves and black. There is no change in the tone of the poem, except that it progressively becomes more saddening.

LINE BY LINE ANALYSIS

STANZA 1 (the speaker demands a domestic response)

Private grief

Note all the imperative verbs throughout the poem.

Nowhere is there anything in this stanza to convey grief or sadness that is personal. If anything, the imagery conveys nothing but a determined attitude to do the perfunctory. To maintain the proper form and structure that society expects at someone’s death.
Line 1: Stop all the clocks, cut off the telephone,


Once people thought it bad luck for a clock to be running with a dead person present—for example, at a wake. It was an ancient custom to stop the clock in the house when a person died. There were two reasons for this:
·        In Victorian times, when an important person died and there was a clock in the room, you had to stop the clock at the death hour. They believed that when a person died, time stood still for them and a new period of existence started without time. Note that the ticking of the clock represented the heartbeat of the important person. The speaker cleverly alludes to the idea that in death, time ceases (at least for the dead person).
·        Secondly, it served as a reminder of the time of death to all the mourners who would visit the home when someone died.
Cut off the telephone – could represent modern life and business and the speaker wants the interruption of information to stop. This implies silence.
Telephones must be cut off since no further communication is desired. 
At the time this poem was written, telephones were new inventions. For the speaker of the poem, they likely symbolise the modern world itself—its innovations, its speed, and the sudden ease with which people could communicate with each other.
Line 2: Prevent the dog from barking with a juicy bone,
If a dog barked in the background at a funeral, it was once believed that more people would be dying. In any case, a barking dog, when the speaker is overcome with grief, would be annoying.
Line 3: Silence the pianos and with muffled drum
Silence the pianos – refers to raucous parties and celebrations. These must cease.
With muffled drum – the ceremonious way in which the coffins were brought out.
The speaker wants the focus on proper mourning for the deceased person.
The “Muffled Drum” is still a traditional custom at military funerals. 
Muffled - This can be meant in a literal and figurative sense: literally, the sound emitted from the drum may not be loud and clear. Figuratively, it is an echo of how the speaker feels and perceives the world around him at this moment in time. It is a mournful beat.
Lines 1 to 3 indicate a disconnect between the way the speaker is reacting to the death of his friend and the way the regular sounds and activities of life are going on. The speaker is isolated in his pain from regular life now that the person has died. This justifies his firm commands.
Line 4: Bring out the coffin, let the mourners come.

STANZA TWO (the poet demands a public response)
Public grief
Stanza 2 suggests that the dead man may be an important public official.
The second stanza is just a continuation of the preparations being made in the first stanza. However, we go from the trivial to the exaggerated. These requests are full of hyperbole.
Line 5: Let aeroplanes circle moaning overhead
An excessive and unreasonable request.
Personification – the aeroplanes moan. The aeroplanes are moaning as if expressing their sadness over the person being grieved for. 
Onomatopoeia – moaning is the sound made by the engines of the planes flying with a deliberate purpose. The droning sound makes it appear as if the plane is affected by this death and is mourning as well.

Line 6: Scribbling on the sky the message ‘He is Dead’.

Scribbling traditionally called skywriting. It is accomplished with a single aeroplane flying through the sky to form letters. The white smoke (without getting too technical) is emitted like writing across the sky and it is composed of a special combination of oils which is emitted through the plane's exhaust system.
Personification – the planes are scribbling (quick and untidy writing).
It is an announcement to the world of the passing away of the person. It is the news and reality of the person’s passing covering the sky and, as a result, covering everything below it like a blanket. 

“He Is Dead” – is capitalised and in inverted commas to accentuate the statement as a fact as if a piece of hard-hitting news that is hard to conceive. 
The capitalisation of the word He is found many times in the Bible. It is in this way that the poet is trying to relate to the person who just passed away to divinity. Nonetheless, it indicates that the person who has passed away is important to the speaker.
Line 7: Put crepe bows round the white necks of the public doves,

Crepe – paper bows
This denotes that the doves have been decorated in an artificial show of mourning.
An absurd request – he wants the public to mourn with him.
Public doves – these are the doves that are found in the public parks and town squares. Everyone sees them so this absurd request is a deliberate public announcement which no one must miss.
Doves – symbols of peace and associated with funerals
Line 8: Let the traffic policemen wear black cotton gloves.
Black – the colour associated with mourning and represents the speaker's desire for public despair and mourning.
One’s grief dwarfs the concerns of the rest of the world,
STANZA THREE (the poet’s response)
It is a beautifully evocative section that illustrates the bond between the speaker and the deceased person.
Note the theme of completeness in the language, which covers all four primary compass directions and all seven days of the week. Similarly, noon and midnight together cover, by synecdoche (parts standing for the whole), all hours of the day. 
The stanza, at the same time, reveals the tragedy of human life, which is that everyone must die and that almost everyone will experience being severed from a loved one.
Line 9: He was my North, my South, my East and West,

Metaphor – the deceased person is compared to a compass. This suggests that he gave the speaker direction and a sense of constancy.
Repetition – with nine uses of “my” (possessive pronoun) in three lines, the speaker takes possession of his subject.
My - a sense of ownership
The deceased was the speaker’s compass of life. Now without the deceased person, the poet has lost his direction. It conveys a sense of helplessness as one is unable to revive the dead. It is in this sense that the poet is now spiritually lost.
North, South, East and West – covers the globe. Paraphrased, this line would read: “He was my World”, therefore the speaker’s everything!
Line 10: My working week and my Sunday rest,

The use of everyday terms, especially ones found in routines such as Working week and Sunday rest portray the level of intimacy these two individuals had. They were always in contact every day of the week.
Note the contrast between working and rest. In other words, the deceased person was central to the speaker’s activities.
Line 11: My noon, my midnight, my talk, my song;

Noon midnight – refers to the two opposite times of the day. It suggests that the deceased defined the speaker’s sense of time.
My talk - he influenced the speaker’s communication; every conversation was about him.
My song – he influenced the speaker’s temperament (attitude) and mood.
Line 12: I thought that love would last forever: I was wrong.
I thought that – an unpleasant truth

Last forever - there is a timeless notion that love conquers all; that it will last eternally.

I was wrong anti-climax. Note the build-up of lines 9 to 11 and then the crashing “I was wrong” which reinforces the speaker’s disappointment or sudden depression now that the person he loves has passed away.

This holds an interesting idea. Why would love not transcend death? Does one stop loving after someone has passed away?
Alternatively, it could merely indicate that the poet would no longer be able to reciprocate any of the love that he previously gave to the  individual. Perhaps the plot was considering love as one of ‘give and take’ rather than just the speaker ‘giving’. In that sense, love has died for the individual. 
Caesura – A stop or pause in a metrical line, often marked by punctuation (note the colon here) or by a grammatical boundary, such as a phrase or clause. 
Auden reinforces this sense of disillusionment with a caesura (a break in rhythm) in the middle of this line, separating the speaker’s previous romantic illusions from the harsh reality of the present.
The effect of the caesura is to emphasise the impact of “I was wrong”.
STANZA FOUR (the poet’s demands from the natural world)
In this stanza, the poet uses hyperbole – extreme exaggeration. He is requesting the absurd and ridiculous. However, it is used to indicate his extreme sorrow.
It is here that we see the emotional breakdown of the poet as his grief comes to a climax.

Note the use of metaphor in nature. 

Stars represent the aspirations and guidance that we have in life

The Sun and Moon are imagery for the Heart and Mind

Ocean conveys a great depth in emotion and feeling and to some extent, spirit.

There is a sense of irony here, for the rejection of these metaphors show that there are no more emotions worth feeling, but the will to reject these feelings show anything but hopelessness.
Tone of despair

Everything that gives light and stands for life, radiance, and beauty is everything the speaker has shut out. All of these images are dark and full of despair, heavy with the emotions of the speaker.
The beauty of nature cannot be appreciated anymore.
Line 13: The stars are not wanted now; put out every one,
Note the stars are symbols of romantic love
There is no need for the stars to shine or to give direction. The speaker wants them to mourn.

Line 14: Pack up the moon and dismantle the sun,
The natural function of both the moon and the sun are superfluous now.


Line 15: Pour away the ocean and sweep up the wood;
An unreasonable request – everything must disappear.
Line 16: For nothing now can ever come to any good.

If any of the elements were allowed to continue operating in their natural order, it would belittle the speaker’s grief.

It is in this way that the poem ends on a sad note, not only for the deceased but also for the poet, who has died spiritually in the process and is forced to continue living as a hollow shell without the deceased individual in question, which we may interpret as being far worse than actual death.


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